deep inside...
How much longer can
I persevere?
How much longer
until my fingers
-bruised and bleeding
slip
and I fall-
diminishing into the
darkness
where no light can
permeate -
and all is lost - - -
forever?
COMMENT - bri
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deep inside... How much longer can I persevere? How much longer until my fingers -bruised and bleeding slip and I fall- diminishing into the darkness where no light can permeate - and all is lost - - - forever? COMMENT - bri |
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| lish September 8, 2004 08:44 PM PDT  haha of course I am commenting again so i can beat JACIE muhahaha but i still love u jacie! lol i am going 2 preach 2 ur teacher! lol yay yay...o and bri i loooooooove u! muah!!!! | ||
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| Jacie September 7, 2004 05:56 PM PDT 12... I WIN! HAHAHA...heehee Now now I know ya'll will comment again to beat me...but I wanted to try :D heehe LOVE YOU LOTS BRI!! | ||
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| alisha September 7, 2004 04:43 PM PDT well im makieng it 11 haha i win dustin! lol yay go bri shes little miss POPULAR! lol love ya hunny! and i love the song on here! lol | ||
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| Dustin September 6, 2004 09:54 PM PDT 10~! 10~! 10!!!!!!! I think thats a new record... wo0t! | ||
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| Jacie September 2, 2004 09:59 PM PDT  yeshtaH! i decided to grant you with your 9th comment. I'm telling you I think fours a big # for me and YOU GET NINE!!! lol! AWW dearest you are VERY VERY VERY LOVED And I miss you oooh soo much!! KEEP WRITING!!:D MUWAH | ||
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| alisha September 2, 2004 07:55 PM PDT wow 7 commetns!(and this shall be the 8) how do u get so lucky w/ all these comments? o i forgot! cuz usuch a super awesome amazeing popular person! lol well i love u!!!!! muah! | ||
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| Dustin September 2, 2004 07:32 PM PDT haha, yup yup Lindsey... I LOK IT A LOT! But your poems aren't a bunch of caca de baca (cow poo), they're eeeeeeeeexcceeellent... Yep yep... 7 comments now Bri, wut wut? | ||
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| Lindsey September 2, 2004 04:14 PM PDT  O_0 wowie (yes, I just said wowie), that is amazing. It makes my poems look like a bunch of shit. I am certain Dustin will LOVE it! | ||
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| Ashton September 1, 2004 04:10 PM PDT wut he said...LOL! As Mrs. C. would/did say "O-kee Dokee Fanokee...." HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! | ||
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| alisha September 1, 2004 03:58 PM PDT i like it too! *sigh* y cant i be talented? lol love ya girl! | ||
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| bri August 31, 2004 09:55 PM PDT wow... being compared even in passing to emily dickenson is the greatest compliment i have ever received... | ||
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| Jacie August 31, 2004 07:20 PM PDT real deep babE! I love it! It's really good. keep da writing coming and one day i promise you could soo have a book of poetry like ... emily dickenson! love ya!! muwah | ||
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| Dustin August 31, 2004 12:12 AM PDT yay yay first to comment! "posted at 10:30"? What r u doing up tat late? You have to get yer rest for the vball game! duh!!! :) :) I LIKE IT A LOT LOT LOT!!!! a yeea yeea! Yayy... *happyness* Whenever i finish my blog... eh, so many layout problems... but when I'm happy with it, I want to put this in the sidebar! can I can I? tis fine if u dun want to though! Yay yay! I liked it a lot and have a shpiffy day and go volleyball! | ||
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